Tartan Problem
:Crowding in the hallways
Evidence
-Studends cant get through the hallways
-I see many people not moveing to where they need to be
-the school is over crowded for its right amount of students
Contributing Factors
-the short passing time
-people stop to talk to friends and gather around the stairs
-school is over populated
Solution
-Make a new school rule against lingering and blocking hallways.
-Make passing times longer so people can get to classes on time so the crowding in the hallways won't be such a problem.
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Hannah i liked your tartan problem because it adresses an issue that everyone encounters everday. You had strong evidence and and what seem to be good contributing factors. You may want to check your spelling because i saw that you had issues right off the bat with the word studend which should be spelled like s-t-u-d-e-n-t.
Over all it was fantastic
hannah i liked your problem analysis it really gives a relevant problem and a great solution.
GET CAUGHT UP HOWEVER!
cody j hr 3
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